grey smoldering sky
binding summer in chains
a restless confinement
storm clouds by dreambird
Tuesday, August 19, 2008
One Line Haiku Storm Clouds
grey smoldering sky
binding summer in chains
a restless confinement
storm clouds by dreambird
grey smoldering sky
binding summer in chains
a restless confinement
storm clouds by dreambird
2 comments:
i like this a lot. :) i like how the restless confinement can refer to the speaker confined at home, perhaps by the prospect of rain, and i like how it can be summer confined, but restless because any day, the sun might peek out gloriously again.
I enjoyed this post. I like the image of the smoldering clouds - it really conveys the greyish color and the idea that they are threatening to burst any minute. I thought it was interesting how the clouds are confining summer, like they're keeping it from really being summer.
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