Friday, July 17, 2009

while the midnight sky
tore itself apart
with lightning -
my barefoot chidren
danced in the puddles

3 comments:

Wahyu W. Basjir said...

Lovely haiku, Dave. It sends me back to my chilhood days..

Wahyu W. Basjir said...

It's tanka, isn't it?

Unknown said...

hello! this is laura your cousin!
here is my flikr:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/lmknightphotography/

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