Tuesday, August 19, 2008

One Line Haiku Storm Clouds

grey smoldering sky
binding summer in chains
a restless confinement

storm clouds by dreambird


scatterhaiku said...

i like this a lot. :) i like how the restless confinement can refer to the speaker confined at home, perhaps by the prospect of rain, and i like how it can be summer confined, but restless because any day, the sun might peek out gloriously again.

Dark*Autumn said...

I enjoyed this post. I like the image of the smoldering clouds - it really conveys the greyish color and the idea that they are threatening to burst any minute. I thought it was interesting how the clouds are confining summer, like they're keeping it from really being summer.

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