Friday, July 17, 2009

while the midnight sky
tore itself apart
with lightning -
my barefoot chidren
danced in the puddles

3 comments:

Wandering spirit said...

Lovely haiku, Dave. It sends me back to my chilhood days..

Wandering spirit said...

It's tanka, isn't it?

Laura said...

hello! this is laura your cousin!
here is my flikr:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/lmknightphotography/

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